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Line art by: Kouken
Color by: me
So, NIPPONkidd was teaching me some things on paint tool Sai and this is the 4 hour fruit of my labor. I would really like some critiques so I can improve my coloring skills. This was honestly my first time coloring anything and I apologize if its crappy.
Color by: me
So, NIPPONkidd was teaching me some things on paint tool Sai and this is the 4 hour fruit of my labor. I would really like some critiques so I can improve my coloring skills. This was honestly my first time coloring anything and I apologize if its crappy.
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I personally think that, while you focus on the shading, you lack appreciation for lights! Those would be lighter colours over the base, hair shine, sometimes blushes/skin shines, and areas where the light hits the clothes strongly! The lights are, in my opinion, a super important part of shading >3<
The eyes could use more detail! I dunno what to really say for them because eyes are the bane of my existence when I draw, buuut pupills? idk it's a style to not do them so it's your discretion
Vision: I totally see what you were going for with the colouring! I think
Originality: Low because not your lineart? idk sorry
Technique: TOTALLY on the right track, you're really getting there!
Impact: I was really impressed when I saw this aaa